One,
To one,
Person,
To person,
Mind,
To mind.
Breathe,
Touch,
Taste,
Taste,
Touch,
Breathe.
Give,
And take,
Give,
And take,
Take,
And give.
See me,
Feel me,
Touch me,
For I am at peace.
All I was,
All I am,
All I could be,
For I am at peace.
Yesterday,
Today,
Tomorrow,
For I am at peace.
I am me,
I am myself,
I am I,
For I am at peace.
Do not mourn me,
Do not miss me,
Celebrate,
For I am at peace.
October 19th, 2011 at 3:30 am
mysterious and haunting with the repetitions or echos? This one kind of stirred my soul in an unconfortable way. hmmmm…
October 19th, 2011 at 3:49 am
Did I see this before, Justin? I like the minimalism, yet it’s packed with thoughts to chew on.
October 19th, 2011 at 3:55 am
glad you have found peace with yourself…i think that is something many people miss…
October 19th, 2011 at 4:14 am
and that peace shall keep the sanity…a lovely write, Tino ~
October 19th, 2011 at 5:03 am
A comforting write that certainly left ME at peace.
Alex
http://alexdissing.blogspot.com/
October 19th, 2011 at 5:45 am
The resolve is very palpable here, almost like a meditation.
October 19th, 2011 at 6:32 pm
Nice, very nice. short, sweet, packed. good piece.
thanks for sharing.
October 19th, 2011 at 8:38 pm
Peace can be everything…glad you found it.
October 19th, 2011 at 9:15 pm
Thanks, but the search goes on and probably will until I die. That was the message I was trying to purvey.
October 19th, 2011 at 9:57 pm
This is wonderful….. Well done
Melanie
October 20th, 2011 at 3:59 am
fun piece, peace is everyone’s dreams.
wonderful delivery of your state of mind.
October 20th, 2011 at 2:37 pm
there is something haunting about this, especially the ending. at the same time, there’s also a deep sense of oneness that is very well captured with the repetition and the minimalism.
October 20th, 2011 at 4:18 pm
it is good that peace has finally come and you were able to find peace for yourself I think many people are afraid of this one and do not want to try
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/18/farewell-my-three-legged-friend/
October 22nd, 2011 at 3:14 am
the last paragraph shows some creepy imagery,
love the word flow, hope all is well.
come join poets rally if you could.